The Dawning Of A New Dream

I havn't posted anything here in quite a while so I thought I'd share some lyrics I'm gonna propose to my new band when it gets started up in a few weeks. Enjoy.

The Dawning Of A New Dream

Many years have past
All have gone too fast
Can’t quite get a grasp
Of who or where I am
In a world so cold
Liars steal black gold
In a place so wrong
Where none of them belong

But I am stronger
My thought is hunger
For the knowledge most will not find
And they might hate me
But they wont break me
Because I am one with all mankind

Listen to it
Listen to a thousand whispers
Become a world wide scream
Listen to it
Give in to it
The dawning of a new dream

Love is not my word
But hate is so absurd
Can’t we all just get along?
Live and let live as time moves on
As we write our own doom
Through the mist and gloom
Peeks the gold horizon
The beginning of a new uprising

And we are stronger
We’ll live longer
Because until the death we shall unite
And in this hour
I take this vow
To conquer darkness with the power of my mind

Listen to it
Listen to a thousand whispers
Become a world wide scream
Listen to it
Give in to it
The dawning of a new dream

Not so long ago…
We were free
In a world
Of tranquillity

But now the silence is broken
Peace is in pieces
And we must stand
We will not be denied

Listen to it
Listen to a thousand whispers
Become a world wide scream
Listen to it
Give in to it
The dawning of a new dream

The silence is broken
Peace is in pieces
And we must stand
We will not be denied

 

It's good stuff however I feel you've written better.

I like this bit loads:

Listen to it
Listen to a thousand whispers
Become a world wide scream
Listen to it
Give in to it
The dawning of a new dream

 

That was good, I liked it a lot. And I agree with Dedicated on the lyric part.

 

This is good. Great work; and as previously said, I like that lyric very much. And a curiosity, that lyrics remind me of Bono (U2) and Chris Martin (Coldplay) writing, but anyways, it´s good.

 

Thanks guys.

 

I really like the first verse a lot...got me hooked right away.

 

That was a great read!

The following lines stood out IMO...

But I am stronger
My thought is hunger
For the knowledge most will not find
And they might hate me
But they wont break me
Because I am one with all mankind

 

Thanks guys.