What your last words were

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    Rahat

    Rahat Nyeh LPA VIP

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    I wrote this to basically get some closure on the death of my best friend Angel

    When I remember you my mind starts to stir
    Cuz I don't even know what your last words were
    I walked around and wondered what you would do
    If you were in my position I thought it all through
    I figured you would know not to dwell in the past
    Theres just no time for that, life moves way to fast

    Everytime I think of you my mind starts to stir
    Cuz I don't even know what your last words were
    I was staring at the ceiling last night while in bed
    Remembering again all those things that you said
    You told me you would do nothing stupid...you lied
    I though about that durin that one time that i cried

    When I remember you my mind starts to stir
    Cuz i don't even know what your last words were
    I walked around and thought that I'd see you somewhere
    Till it hit me that its real...you're no longer there
    I wouldn't let that be one of the times that i cried
    So now rest in peace man i'll see you on the other side...
     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    That was beautiful. Wow...very touching. :cry:
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    wow. that thing really holds massive emotion. i'm so sorry for your loss. and i bet she never meant to hurt you. sometimes, destiny is a bitch, and fate is her other bitchy friend. they grab us, or our loved ones and just take them away...but other times... they gave them to us in the first place.
     
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    Rahat

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    umm...Angel was a guy but yea thanks for reading it and well i am pretty much moving on right now
     
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    Harlz

    Harlz More Scared Of You Than You Are Of Me LPA Super Member

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    Thats really touching. Some of those lines make me think of my ma, she passed earlier this year, so I can imagine how hard it was for you to write.
    Good work man.
    :cloud:

    EDIT: man i just checked out your song on myspace. That shit is awesome, I love it, keep it up man!
     
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    Rahat

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    yea it its pretty hard but usually i find that writing to let things out really helps and yea thanks for checking out my song
     
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    Version One

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    deep. my condolences.
     
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    Rahat

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    yea thanks for reading man
     

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