Does This Smell Like Chloroform To You?

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    Dedicated

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    This is a new song that my band has in the works. When it's done and recorded I'll give a shout in this thread and you shall be able to hear it :)

    Hope you like it :)

    "Does This Smell Like Chloroform To You?"

    Let's set the scene - cute girl in her nightgown,
    Scared out of her skin, sweatin' pound for pound,
    Now let's throw me into the scene with her,
    It doesn't get better though, it just gets worse,
    And let's set the scene - it' just you and me,
    I'm trying not to dream about the world I can't see,
    Let's just pack up and fly away,
    Big mistakes made a difference today.

    Enough setting the scene, it just hurts too much,
    To think of you people, confusing love and lust,
    (How can you mix up passion and fantasy?)
    Enough setting the scene, it just hurts too much,
    To think of you people, confusing love and lust,
    (How can you mix up passion and fantasy?)

    "You've got a girlfriend,
    What are you doing?"
    And I can't help but agree with them,
    Been sitting here since twenty past ten,
    It's obvious when things'll never happen.

    You're attractive in your flirtatious ways,
    And I've been fighting my feelings for days,
    But now it's just you, me and the waves,
    And in a strange way I can hear them say;

    "You've got a girlfriend,
    What are you doing?"
    And I can't help but agree with them,
    Been sitting here since twenty past ten,
    It's obvious when things'll never happen.

    It's just that me and her have been so troubled,
    Recently it's like all our problems have doubled,
    I thought that cheating on her would make things right,
    Well everybody knew that I'm not bright.

    "You've got a girlfriend,
    What are you doing?"
    And I can't help but agree with them,
    Been sitting here since twenty past ten,
    It's obvious when things'll never happen,
    Things'll never happen.
     
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    Luke

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    I said it to you before man, this is a great piece of work, well done. :)
     
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    Janie Jones

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    Wow. It's really nice. I'd love everything with urban metaphorish stuff, but, this is really great.
     
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    Cheers for the comments everyone :)
     
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    You're welcome you self-promoting scouser git. :lol:
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Fucking awesome...I love it
     
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    Cheers XD
     
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    Zakrisk

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    I thought it was amazing. Good job. People have actually been saying those exact words to me. ...:/
     
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    sorry it took so long but cheers for the comment :D
     

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