Hold Me Now

Hold Me Now

Verse 1:
the world is turning
all the way around
and I keep on falling
all the way down
cuz this gravity
got a hold on me
so please Oh please

Chorus:
hold me now
I’m falling down
down to the ground
so hold me now
I don’t wanna die
don’t wanna close my eyes

Verse 2:
I see the world
as I’m falling fast
and I remember my girl
and how I loved her so bad
and I don’t want that to change
I don’t want my life to end
so please Oh please

[Chorus]

Verse 3: (rap)
one time someone told me
that this life is nothing but a test
so I went to my room
trying to hang myself
knowing that I can’t pass this sh*t
but now that I see myself dying
I just don’t want to reach to an end
cuz when I’ll hit the ground
I’m gonna break into pieces
and the worst thing is
no one will know that I existed
so I'm begging you god not to allow this to happen
just give me one more chance at this
and from my heart I promise
that i'll bring back to the world its happiness
so please Oh please

[Chorus]

Whisper:
Thank You


Check out my other song which I called "my song"

 

Incredible. I loved it.
All of the words flowed well together.
Good job!

 

Thanks

 

I'd have to say pretty good, no offense, not the best of the board. (8 of 10)

 

Nice flow

 

that's good. keep up the good work!

 

does it really matter whether it's the best of the board or not? You can't compare art. Anyways, I thought it was lovely. Good job.