Fade

This song is about a kid who was ignored all of this life, and has nothing left to live for. Please reply with your thoughts.
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(Verse 1)

Tears come down his eyes/
At night I hear the crys,
Of a kid on the block just like me/
He's been ignored all of his life/
He didnt think that his life would be such a chore/
He'd do anything reset his life back to the age of four/
Maybe he'd have his chance again/
To build on up from the ground/
To be the biggest f*ckin name, in his town/
But when he f*cks up, everyone laughs at him
Like he's a clown/
This kid feels like sh*t when he has to frown/
Why couldn't he be the king, and claim his crown/
The rhythm is the spirit and the music is the sound/

(Chorus x2)

There's a kid, just like me, might be just like you/
He'd do anything to be the most popular at his school/
He'd try to stay calm and keep his cool/
To not be ignored, he prays every night/
It seems like he's another lost soul, without any light/
He tries to fight back with all his will and might/
But he still remains ignored, nowhere in sight/

(Verse 2)

He went for a walk down the street/
He saw this kid, he said your dead meat/
So he tryed to stay up on his feet/
Tryin not to bust his ass on the concrete/
It seems like all he could do is run/
Whatever happen to all the games and fun/
The sh*t all ended when that kid pulled out a gun/
He shot 2 plus 2 bullets, ah f*ck the sum/
The ignored kid is done/
And then everyone wondered why he wanted,
to start his life over/
Maybe you'll know, why when you see the bullet shells
in his shoulder/
The kid just wanted some attention/
He didnt ask for anything more, no suspense/
He had to live with his family his whole, life who
couldn't pay the rents/
I really hope this song is makin sense/
This kid Faded away, no remorse, it was immense/

(Chorus x2)

There's a kid, just like me, might be just like you/
He'd do anything to be the most popular at his school/
He'd try to stay calm and keep his cool/
To not be ignored, he prays every night/
It seems like he's another lost soul, without any light/
He tries to fight back with all his will and might/
But he still remains ignored, nowhere in sight/

 

Thats awesome!




I think the concept is good!


a great 9.5/10

 

Deep. Meanigful. Some of the best this board has seen. (9.9/10) The second verse confused me the first time through. Couldn't tell who you were talking about.

 

Thanks for the feedback as always guys.

 

That's awsome!!!!!! Are you going to turn this into a song? That's awesome, man. Keep up the good work.

 

I've recorded Verse One and the Chorus so far, I'm doing Verse 2 later, so the song should be done tonight.

 

Wow, that song's freakin' tight. When I first saw the word 'ignored', Faint automatically came to my mind..........But overall, I give it a 9.5/10.

 

Very niiice!

 

If you want the recording of the song, e-mail me or talk to me on MSN ([email protected])..Peace

 

Woow that's really coolage haha