Here's the first real song I've written in a long time. Please read and respond. Thanks. SHADES OF NIGHT You're with me I'm with you I know now why you've been so hesitant You've kept it all inside thinking you can't But you don't have to change for me at all Everything about you's what made me fall And no one's gonna change that in my mind Just look a little deeper and you'll find That my heart is as true to you as day And I hope you'll find this out some way I just want you to be mine For the rest of time I can see into your soul You aren't sure where you should go Take my hand and you will see That being by my side is all you'll need Did you know you're with me all the time? And everywhere I look you're in my sight Thoughts of you are what keep me in check With everything that I haven't lost yet And no one's gonna change my love for you Just come a little closer, see it's true Every time I blink I see your eyes And now I've come to grips, I realize I just want you to be mine For the rest of time I can see into your soul You aren't sure where you should go Take my hand and you will see That being by my side is all you'll need I can see into your soul You aren't sure where you should go Take my hand and you will see That being by my side is all you'll need You're with me I'm with you You're with me I'm with you You're with me I'm with you I'm sorry that I've overwhelmed you But you gotta know my heart is true Maybe one day you'll be with me I'm looking to that day, it's all I see I can see into your soul You aren't sure where you should go Take my hand and you will see That being by my side is all you'll need I can see into your soul You aren't sure where you should go Take my hand and you will see That being by my side is all you'll need You're with me I'm with you I'm with you I'm with you
WOW!! That was awsume, that really hit my heart cuz i care about someone alot just like in the song, um...i just wanted to ask for your permission. if it's i'll right, if i may copy and paste your song to an e-mail and send it the person that i really care about, i'll wait til i get your answer , but really that is an amazing song, you did a great job**. /\ /\ ~*marissa*~* a.k.a KiTtIe "meow" o o =Y= \_/
Will, I'm jealous of your song-writing talent. You may have said I have poetry talent, but it's funny, I can't write songs the way you do; it's so hard for me. I hope one day I can hear these songs. You're one of the best writers.