What's Left?

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Amanda, Nov 24, 2006.

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    Amanda

    Amanda RIP Chester LPA Super VIP

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    What's up with you?
    What's down the line?
    What's right beside me?
    What's left of this?

    How is it that so often
    I will sit here wondering of what my life consists
    Playing over in my mind the last few day
    Why I bother to exist
    What's keeping me from slitting my wrists

    Call me emotional
    Or call me weak
    Call me an irrational teenager
    But what does it all come down to?

    What's up above us?
    What's down below?
    What's right or wrong?
    What's left of me?
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    I think it's okay, but I'm not sure if I like the questions in it. Because at one stage, it was a bit confrontational for me, but I like the rhyming scheme in the 2nd and 3rd stanza.

    6/10 for me.
     

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