Just For Once

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    Dedicated

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    Just For Once

    Why do you choose to punish me?
    I feel so alone, why can’t you see,
    That every time you smack me I fall,
    Back against the wall,
    In pain from the fight,
    In horror of the sight,
    You hate me for who I am,
    But I’m not gonna change.

    What do you think is wrong with me?
    What the f*ck do you think is wrong?
    Why can’t you leave me alone?
    Just for once.

    The bruises you left can’t be covered,
    I cry of pain as my face is smothered,
    By the pillow of death you bring,
    Do you think the sight of the blood is a nice thing?
    I’ll get you back,
    For all these attacks,
    You know you’ve got a problem,
    But you don’t want any help.

    What do you think is wrong with me?
    What the f*ck do you think is wrong?
    Why can’t you leave me alone?
    Just for once.

    You can’t get away from the guilt you feel,
    Suddenly the pain you’ve caused feels so real,
    The times you’ve attacked,
    The pain you’ve caused, you can never get back,
    You’ve lost your hope as the cops come,
    You can’t apologise now that it’s done,
    Against the wall so afraid,
    In a different perspective I’ve seen it before.

    What do you think is wrong with me?
    What the f*ck do you think is wrong?
    Why can’t you leave me alone?
    Just for once.

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    Please rate this out of ten, thanks ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Its really damn good
     
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    Unconventional. It was an experience. Everything here was perfect! (10 half of 10)
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks for the input guys/gals ^_^
     
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    Jamie

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    Its soo good that I'm jealous
     
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    Thanks, man! I just got the guitar part for it, so when I record it (Hopefully on Monday) you can hear the vocals and guitar parts ^_^
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    Well, you better tell us where to get or we'll get the bats out and beat it out of you. . .


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    J/K.
     
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    Jamie

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    yeah we will send the odd squad round for them...muahahaha
     
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    Terry

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    11/10!! That was really terrific.
     
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    Alacrity

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