"The invitation"

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    Nikki

    Nikki I have no idea what is going on LPA Super Member

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    Ok. This has a point, read it first and then think about what I ask after it.

    (I DID NOT WRITE THIS POEM, ALRIGHT!?)

    The Invitation

    It doesn’t interest me what you do for a living.
    I want to know what you ache for
    and if you dare to dream of meeting your heart’s longing.

    It doesn’t interest me how old you are.
    I want to know if you will risk looking like a fool
    for love
    for your dream
    for the adventure of being alive.

    It doesn’t interest me what planets are squaring your moon...
    I want to know if you have touched the centre of your own sorrow
    if you have been opened by life’s betrayals
    or have become shrivelled and closed
    from fear of further pain.

    I want to know if you can sit with pain
    mine or your own
    without moving to hide it
    or fade it
    or fix it.

    I want to know if you can be with joy
    mine or your own
    if you can dance with wildness
    and let the ecstasy fill you to the tips of your fingers and toes
    without cautioning us to
    be careful
    be realistic
    remember the limitations of being human.

    It doesn’t interest me if the story you are telling me is true.
    I want to know if you can disappoint another to be true to yourself.
    If you can bear the accusation of betrayal
    and not betray your own soul.
    If you can be faithless and therefore trustworthy.

    I want to know if you can see Beauty
    even when it is not pretty
    every day.
    And if you can source your own life
    from its presence.

    I want to know if you can live with failure
    yours and mine
    and still stand at the edge of the lake
    and shout to the silver of the full moon,
    “Yes.”

    It doesn’t interest me to know where you live or how much money you have.
    I want to know if you can get up after the night of grief and despair
    weary and bruised to the bone
    and do what needs to be done
    to feed the children.

    It doesn’t interest me who you know
    or how you came to be here.
    I want to know if you will stand
    in the centre of the fire
    with me
    and not shrink back.

    It doesn’t interest me where or what or with whom
    you have studied.
    I want to know what sustains you
    from the inside
    when all else falls away.

    I want to know if you can be alone
    with yourself
    and if you truly like the company you keep
    in the empty moments.


    <div align=right>(Oriah Mountain Dreamer)</div>

    This poem was read to me by someone, and it hit me very very hard. What I want to know, is how would you feel, if someone close (or maybe not, who knows) read this to you.

    Would you go all warm inside? Want to punch the persons lights out? What would you do..?

    (Pointless I know, but I like it :D)
     
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    LinkinTheory

    LinkinTheory Well-Known Member

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    Hmm. That's a tough question. I never usually react with violence, and I really don't get warm inside but once or twice a year, so that's out. I'd say I'd react with a long bout of silence and then sit down and just think about my life and how I can live better. And I'd also think of the future.
     
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    Omar

    Omar Administrator LPA Super Member

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    Hmmm, very profound.

    I believe the answer is "Perhaps, we shall see..."

    It was intresting, but know the chemist says I have to leave so I won't be coming back for awhile

    + Prisoner Omar
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    I kinda 'skimmed' through it, but I still thought it was really good!!
     
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    tifferz

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    that was an awesome poem...and i guess, the only thing i can say is that it really makes you think, and i like things that make you think...i would probably reconsider a lot of things....kinda doing that now even
     

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