no title song (please r &r)

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    gazzalp

    gazzalp Active Member

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    heres another song, please read and reply

    Ive been through so much pain lately
    It could turn into fate maybe
    why don’t you just say the,
    Words and ill stop
    Thinking the thoughts
    But its just that ive fought
    For far too long

    Ive always fought
    Ive always been caught
    Trapped
    Trapped inside of me
    Ill never break free
    Don’t you see
    What you’ve done to me
    (what ive done to me)

    im not used to this
    in the ####
    been hit and dissed
    always using my fist
    just to feel safety
    im running around blindly

    Chorus
    all I wanna do
    is get away from you
    (don’t wanna lose)
    what ive earned in my life
    I’ve come close to the blade of the knife

    ive been trapped
    been capped
    been sacked
    on a normal day
    don’t even get my say

    My life has hit a brick wall
    Im getting set up for an emotional stall
    Don’t wanna hear my name get called
    Heading into a downfall
    Im not like you all
    (I see myself, im not like anyone else)
    (I’ve been like this for years, shedding way too many tears)
    Normal people have their ups and downs
    When you look at me im wearing a frown
    Coz im always in a down

    So what im speaking is the truth
    All the faults are in you, you, you
    Whats happening to todays youth

    Cant you see what ive been through
    Hardship, battles, it’s not happening to you
    Everyday the same memories
    Everyone seems displeased
    I think ill roll up my sleeves
    And take my knife out of its sheath
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    You were sacked? OW! But anyway, it was pretty good, lots a rhyme, me likee the rhymee. (8 half/10)
     
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    gazzalp

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    sorry double post
     
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    gazzalp

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    actually its not about me i just like to write in first person, im kinda like LP, i write about what some people have to face everyday (yes i know you dont get sacked everyday, but everyday someone will get sacked)
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    You're right about that. When somebody gets mad at you, the first technique they use is the uber-sack. Ow.
     
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    Andrea

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    I like what you wrote!
     

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