How's these lyrics sound to you?

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    LinkinTheory

    LinkinTheory Well-Known Member

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    My Secret
    That I kept from all
    Ate me away
    While I watched me fall
    Into my own cell
    My own Personal Hell
    All for a girl,
    Thinking about it
    Makes me hurl
    At myself for being such a fool
    I thought being smart
    Was doing well in school

    I wanted you
    To be with me
    But you’d won’t except
    Who I know myself
    To be.

    I set my sites
    For what would never be.
    But now I see
    That through all this
    Through all I’ve seen
    And wishing that she
    Had never been
    I realized that who I am
    Is just barely good enough
    For me.

    This isn't my best, so I posted it. I may post some more if you like it.
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    They're really good. Keep it up!
     
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    Mark

    Mark Canadian Beauty LPA Administrator

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    hey man, those lyrics rock. keep it up!
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    They are good. Keep writing. I liked it.
     

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