My first try at writing lyrics in a couple months, been stuck on Writer's Block but here goes again. Comments would be appreciated. .:Ignite:. Holding onto this tightly Forgetting all my pain But just slightly Slipping off the edge Your pushing me So far from reality And off of your chaotic ledge Ignite all of these feelings [From my past] Ignite all of these feelings [From deep within] I know that this won't last Your making a mockery of me Igniting the fire That has spread so fast Squeezing the eternal light My world's crashing down Much to your delight I'm drifting far and away Into some unknown sea Just hoping that these feelings Will die and decay Ignite all of these feelings [From my past] Ignite all of these feelings [From deep within] I know that this won't last Your making a mockery of me Igniting the fire That has spread so fast Look at this At what you have created I cannot move on Desperation has made its final call Ignite all of these feelings [From my past] Ignite all of these feelings [From deep within] I know that this won't last Your making a mockery of me Igniting the fire That has spread so fast Ignite all of these feelings [From my past] Ignite all of these feelings [From deep within]
Very, very nice. It seems you have passed writer's block. Hopefully you can keep writing more like this.