This is the First Fight That im Not in the Middle of

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    The_Cool_Cow

    The_Cool_Cow Well-Known Member

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    This is the First Fight That Im Not in the Middle of

    Hold on
    Cause I will never let you go
    I will never be left alone
    Like I was before

    As the world falls apart around me
    I scream to god
    (please make this stop)
    And as the world falls apart around me
    I feel as if my hearts been stopped

    So wrap your arms around me
    (holding strong)
    Just even out your breathing
    (because were moving on)

    I dont usually pray for help
    I had nothing to complain about
    (thats what I kept telling myself)
    But now I think ill give it a try

    Just wanna die
    I just wanna want to run and hide

    My screams lost inside
    The sounds of the fights

    As the world falls apart around me
    I scream to god
    (please make this stop)
    And as the world falls apart around me
    I feel as if my hearts been stopped

    As the world falls apart around me
    I scream to god
    (please make this stop)
    And as the world falls apart around me
    I feel as if im breaking apart
     
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    Christopher

    Christopher Über Member Über Member

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    I really like it aspecially that it's supposed to be sung by two people or at least two voices. (I mean the lines between ()'s :p lol)
     
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    mathew51b

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    I really like it as well, I think that it would work really well in a song, or just as a poem (not sure which one it is, and either would work)

    good work
     
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    GrafiTTied

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    me likes it!
     

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