Silent Scream Once again I’m here suffocating under these words What I thought would pass has become much more worse I’d take a gunshot to my head just to end this pain that is you Always telling me what to say and what paths I must chose You seem to have a grip on my life as if it was yours You’ve gotta let go of me cos I can’t take much more Every time you say something will be good for me I take one look at you and I silently scream Just step away…so far away from me I’ve gotta be left alone from you Just go away…get away from me I hate the way you’ve tried to make me you Over again I’m consumed with hate of your voice What I thought I could be has been ruled out of choice And yet I’d rather do these things that you say Just so I wouldn’t have to listen to your voice again You’ve got to get the picture I’ve been painting for so long You need to relinquish control of my life and swiftly move on Every time you say something will be a good chance for me I take one look at you and I silently scream Just step away…so far away from me I’ve gotta be left alone from you Just go away…get away from me I hate the way you’ve tried to make me you Just because you missed your chance years ago You can’t take control of me so just leave me alone Just because your life’s a broken dream It certainly does not mean That I’ll be anything like you I’ll be nothing like you at all! Just step away…so far away from me I’ve gotta be left alone from you Just go away…get away from me I hate the way you’ve tried to make me you Just step away…so far away from me I’ve gotta be left alone from you Just go away…get away from me I’ll never…no never…I’ll never be you!
for some reason...i get the feeling of a blend btween "lying from u" and "with u"....but its very gud though..
great...somehow, with no offence to your originality, i picture NUMB's closeness with this piece. been a very long time since i visited these forums and i must say, reading this was a great way to start posting in these forums again...great work Hellflame.
Yeah I just realised it is a little like 'Numb' isn't it...when I was writing it I had no influence from that song though.
It was really good. Though it seems a little like an LP song, you did great. I like the hook the most out of everything.