"Go Home" is a rap session Elie has, where he goes off on the things that really annoy him. Enough third person, here it is: Whack, all this music is crap. Lyrically, those who wrote it need a slap. 50 Cent, twenty-one questions Kid take a lesson, you're life problem's need a miracle blessin'. Eminem? Why you ryhme with flem? Your voice is a 15 year old going through puberty again. Britney Spears? Miss Aguilera? You're both labeled teen idol's If God liked pop music, he'd put a punishment for your songs in the Bible Tommy Verciti? Are your arms weak and palms sweaty? Eminem's crying again, about his million dollar Chevy. The bills in his pocket's are getting quite heavy That fifteen your old sent to replace him, he's quite ready! Metallica? What the heck did they do with Napster and my free music? Any chance for them to win over a lost fan base, and they lose it. Lars, what the heck was he thinking? The joy of millions of people lost, because he was probably drinking. Limp Bizkit? What happend to Fred Durst? Someone tell that angered child to try and rehearse The only real talent in the band dropped out like a bird from the sky Now the band resorts to the musical stylings of "Love us or die!" Korn, where's the porn? How old are you guys? You don't live in the ghetto, so quit using it in your lines As for the other "gangsta" rappers, just learn to ryhme Don't waste my time, with useless specifications about your washed up lives You lived in the ghetto, two days later you're rich None of y'all are special, your stories are older than a three-day-old itch Will it hurt any of you to write a real rap? There is an entire English dictionary, yet you copy the crap? And would it hurt you to rehearse? Your ryhming injuries need a nurse Every one of your lines has a curse Your head probably hurts, from your two mother's slapping you with a purse I know you have problems, but you can't truly be that mad It's not the fault of your fans that you have one mom and two dads And before you say Elie is a tad bit too obscene Wait for part 2 kids, this little ryhme was edited and clean Part II coming soon.
Wow, I really think it's good. But the funny thing is that it reminds me of something as a combination of High Voltage & Will the Real Slim Shady Please Stand Up? Were you going for that?
If you meant I used those as a beat, no, I didn't I basically was just bobbing my head and ryhming outloud, and I came up with those...
Haha? Thank-you for your comments. I had the 'original' that I was saying outloud, but it was a bit offensive, and I didn't know how it would go over with other people, so I decided to just use the one you see now.
If you meant I used those as a beat, no, I didn't I basically was just bobbing my head and ryhming outloud, and I came up with those... [/b][/quote] Lol. It sounded SOO much like it though . . . . btw, it was really funny.
Elie, it sucks. I'm sorry, but I don't like it. There's no flow at all. And what the hell is..... Korn, where's the porn? How old are you guys? You don't live in the ghetto, so quit using it in your lines As for the other "gangsta" rappers, just learn to ryhme Don't waste my time, with useless specifications about your washed up lives .....all about? How the hell did you go from KoRn to "other gansta rappers"? Are you saying KoRn is a band of "gansta rappers"? And "Korn, where's the porn"? C'mon man, this whole thing just sucks. Work on it and come back. It's terrible. No flow and half of it doesn't make sense.
I respect your opinion Will, and I will take your comments into consideration for my next peice of writing. I know it sounded like I went from Korn, then established them as Gangsta rappers, but it wasn't meant to be like that. It was meant to show the resemblances between them...because...Gangsta's talk about their rough childhood, and so does Jonathan Davis...
as much as i dont want to, i agree with will......it was horrible. like he said, korn got nothin to do w/gangsta or whatever....and whats wrong w/eminem?? what does "why you rhyme w/flem" mean? i dunno, just dont make much sense to me.
Must have edited out the Korn part because I dont see it. And Korn, wheres the porn does make sense, as the bassist's younger sister is involved with adult entertainment I believe. well whatever. Nice I enjoyed it very much. Poo on you haterz.
Korn deals alot with porn. Not only is the relationship that Hoodie mentioned correct, if you look inside 3/5 albums from Korn, the booklet's all include some type of pornography within them...
I'm not a big fan of KoRn and I don't own any of there albums so excuse me for not knowing this apparently crucial piece of information. I'll be sure to run right out and buy all their albums tomorrow for you guys.
it was cool cept from Limp Bizkit? What happend to Fred Durst? Someone tell that angered child to try and rehearse The only real talent in the band dropped out like a bird from the sky Now the band resorts to the musical stylings of "Love us or die!"
What happened, did you not understand that part? A little critique would help me understand the situation, and help my writing of the next part of this song..