Torn (don't give)

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    Torn (don't give):

    I'm confused by possible and impossibility
    I'm forced by capable and incapability
    I'm rushed by the anger slowly filling me

    I'm torn between good and bad
    I'm torn apart by this and that

    Though it's possible to lose what's killing me
    I can't extend my reach to it's full capacity
    When I escape what's inside my mind
    I only give in to all that's outside
    Willingly giving up just to get it out
    I feel myself being covered with doubt
    So I just close my eyes in good hope
    Try to drown out the image of the rope
    Slowly tightening around my neck
    Hell with rebirth I don't wanna be placed at the top of the deck

    I run from possible and impossibility
    I try to find capable and incapability
    I get so wasted by the pills filling me

    I'm torn between right and wrong
    I'm torn apart by the words in your song

    I really wanna get in the game again
    I'd rather be dealt than be strangled by them
    Scrape my tonsils from my throat
    I'd rather bleed to death than hang and choke
    So go bash away at me like you do anyway
    just beat the bruise just like you do every day
    I'll scream and cry and even plea'
    'oh god, oh god just make them leave!'
    I know I said I wanted in again
    But now I know I'm to weak to withstand
    All the fear, all the pain
    I knew I could never sustain!

    it's done...it's just not as good as I hoped
     
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    |CHRYSALIS of DEJECTION|

    |CHRYSALIS of DEJECTION| Well-Known Member

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    wow...u shud finish it...i m relly lookin fwd 2 reading the rest...
     
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    Christopher

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    It's good but I have a feeling that it's a little based on LP's - Part Of Me ...
     
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    Seinfeld

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    It is?:mellow:sry...didn't notice...I wuz listening to StaticX when I wrote it:lol:...hmmm...but...now that you say it...it does seem similar...but I assure you it's mine and it wasn't based on any other lyrics:innocent: :p
     
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    heshboy

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    I thought the same thing, but god forbid something from almost sounding the same because of a few lines. Overall I liked a lot of the lines.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    thank U soh verry muche! ^_^
     

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