I love Singing !1111111111111 I was leaving And never coming back I was leaving And snapping all the crap When I did all I could I broke all the rules Held you away And kept my thoughts at bay As I sit here and stare You wonder if I'll stay But I was leading A life of great mistakes I was leading A life I couldn't take And will not budge For all you say All I do Is for your sake And I'm done with you I'm not your fool anymore And I'm broke in two Personally screwed over my sores I was leaving And never coming back I was leaving And snapping all the crap Stuck in my shoes The ones you threw away Everday The things I do for you But I lose All I want to do But I was leading A life of great mistakes I was leading A life I couldn't take I was leaving I was leading I was leaving Leading away from you I was leaving And never coming back But I was leading A life of great mistakes Leading away from you Leading away from you Leading away from you I was leaving I was leading I was leaving Leading away from you
Man, all I could think of was "Lying From you" when I was reading that. That said, the piece was okay. Not your best but definately not your worst. I'm not trying to be a jerk, but I really think you should try tom revamp your overall rhyming.
i guess all i could think of is...the leaving song pt.3.....part 1 and 2 wer both by AFI...never knew dat pt.3 was cumin out...but it was good though...
Thanks for the replies everybody. I'll have some really great stuff to post in the coming month tbqh.