Is that your song? If not I'm going to have to ask you to take the link down or I'll have to remove it myself.
i kno i told my producer for that song, that he sed it was perfect, the one i did had my voice higher
the lyrics (Speaking) --------------------------------- (Verse 1) Where am I at/ Today I just found out who I was/ I'll always remain in the game, no matter who hates me or what it does/ It's hard to live your life constantly everyday without love/ But every time you try to rise above, you fall back down/ You get disrespected, and it makes you feel mentally effected/ Sometimes you feel like killin yourself, or maybe even someone else/ Maybe this is cause you got no Respekt for yourself.... (Chorus)x2 I came into the game/ At first I felt ashame/ I was scared to take the blame/ ####, I was scared to tell people my name/ And today I was thinkin the same/ One day maybe I'll be on your wall, surrounded by a frame... (Verse 2) Is it the Respekt I deserve, or is it the Respekt you deserve/ No matter who's it is, we live and we learn/ We each get a turn/ To ignite a flame, live it up and burn/ It doesn't matter bout the money you earn/ It matters bout the money you give/ Because it reflects how you live/ When you get in fights, you usually apologize and forgive/ Sometimes we face up to the facts and just live are lives.... (Chorus)x2 I came into the game/ At first I felt ashame/ I was scared to take the blame/ ####, I was scared to tell people my name/ And today I was thinkin the same/ One day maybe I'll be on your wall, surrounded by a frame...
It sounds as if you recorded in a basement and didn't want to wake up your parents...I can barely hear you...
Your rhythm is off every now and then, it sounds as if you're reading rather than flowing, you're way too low and asleep (if this isn't a good version, why post it?), and I just don't like it. Sorry. Practice! Get some energy and put that mic right up to your mouth! I know you can do better than that.
nah damn no listens lol, i had my volume good, i don't kno if you guys understand it, the person who put together the song for me messed the vol. up...and the flow was ment to be like that, if you heard how I really rap/sing you'd know I can do it
sory dood, you sound like you just had a surgery a day before you recorded this...get some energey, pretend you hate sumone
sorry guys to dissapoint you in all, but the song was ment to be sung like that, It's not my regular skill. People who know how I rap/sing no I did that song intentially like that. Yes, I have a few more songs I'm gonna record. One is a Linkin Park cover, but I need the instrumental to be decoded for me (And One). if you can mute the vocals in And One and send me the instrumental, it would be very appreciative.
(yay, i'm on your kool list...) if you have more songs recorded, show them to us. I think you're pretty good. And you can get better!
i have a new demo Description: Beat by: Linkin Park/Chali 2na/Alchemist Written by: XMan Produced by: XMan *THIS IS ONLY THE DEMO OF THIS SONG, NOT THE FULL-VERSION, THE FULL VERSION MIGHT NOT EVEN HAVE THIS BEAT*
I just heard this song. It's kinda kool. He raps pretty good. In this song he proves himself that he has some talent.
Can you post it up here...id like to see if you are better than your other one..because i think you are