Legend to Elie's songs: Singing/Rock Singing Rap Blend of both of the elements above ------- From the heavens come the sky From the sky the clouds die and dry And drop to the ground right before our eyes We hide in hopes to meet up inside But who to meet when we've all lived our lives And moved on to charismatic lives of lies We cry out to the skies As our human nature passes us by We try to find hope within our human nature inside But all hopes within, slowly start to thin And the rope we climbed to get high // fell short of our eye Left us paralyzed and our human feelings deprived And once again we reach the edge again And peer down to what seems the end of the road Our conscience stops our actions and returns us to the humble abode ---chorus starts---- But why?! You cry out from inside! But why?! You held on from outside! But why?! But why do you cry, when inside you're outside, living your lies? I can't cry When all that is me inside Is torn apart by lies My eyes The pools of my demise I cry Where am I? ----chorus ends--- I'm so close, but yet, i'm so far I've lost it all, but I stand tall for all in all I shot down the rope only to grab the end again Cut the end, and watched the skies descend I saw myself // watching me // it hurt so bad To see myself get hurt again // with all I have Now where am I? Does it hurt to see again? To break within? I broke myself but I'm filterin' I have the faith yet i'm falterin' Where am I to go but down the road again? Here comes the age of descendence catching up within And everything I held slips from my hands and soon you win... ---repeat chorus until it fades into distance--- Copyrighted to: It's not officially copyrighted, but don't steal songs, it's just wrong. Also, if you say it belongs to you first, it does, and lawsuits can come in. LOL. Just so some people know. Back to the song above!
Call me stupid, and thanks for your feedback (I think?), but what's your info. ? Do you mean your profile? Either way, thanks for the reply.
nice.. i like it.. good you have a copyright. it's hard to also post on the net forums.. plagarism just happens somtimes.
Oh-My-God. How could you post that on here, that was terrible. J/K!! That was f*cking great!!! In my top 5 songs I've seen on here. I saw the title and was like "Oooh, another sucky song." And read and was like "Sh*t...THAT RULES " I guess "megabyte" doesn't seem like it would be in a good song. Wow.. MORE
Wow, you had me going there for a second and I was like But, thanks for the feedback! Top 5 songs on here? Wow. Thanks.
Wow, you had me going there for a second and I was like But, thanks for the feedback! Top 5 songs on here? Wow. Thanks. [/b][/quote] No prob, that was a really good song! Post some more, I will definately reply to them.
No prob, that was a really good song! Post some more, I will definately reply to them. [/b][/quote] Alrighty! Thanks for the feedback, I will!