I Want, I Know

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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    I Want, I Know

    You want to mature
    Take yourself off of their lure
    Be who you want to be and look so sure
    Make every little choice be yours
    But what does it matter
    ‘Cause in their eyes
    No matter how hard you try
    And fly away you’ll just be left behind
    You’re just another puppet tied up and left wondering why
    It isn’t your time to yet grow from their life
    But it’s just your luck
    They don’t show that they give a fuck
    I’ know it sucks
    Making you want to chuck this life away
    Go to sleep before the end of the day
    And awake still feeling the same old pain


    I want
    I want to grow from your mold
    I know
    ‘Cause I know I’m getting to old
    What I want to show is my life as my own
    But no matter what I say
    My way is way too early


    Craving just to exist
    In a world that you’ve almost missed
    Pressured under the laugher of people getting their kicks
    At every little thing you’ve wished
    But what does it matter
    Hey you’re your own person
    Time to react before the pain worsens
    This is a lesson to get rid of that poison
    ‘Cause it’s limiting all your choices
    You might go insane and start hearing voices
    Their grip will just tighten
    Making you feel more frightened
    And to just feel enlightened
    Go to sleep at the end of the day
    And awake hoping not to feel the same old pain

    ‘Cause you know why?
    (huh)
    ‘Cause you know why?
    (huh)
    ‘Cause, ‘cause you know why?
    (huh,huh)


    It’s your time

    I want to climb out of this can
    Lye and grow old in the sand
    Get a tan in my own plan
    I know what I want
    My way today without feeling afraid
    Time not slippin’ away
    This isn’t The End
    This is the beginning
    The beginning of the end
    Cause I know when to say “when”
    It’s now and not then
    ‘Cause it’s taken forever

    I want
    I want to grow from your mold
    I know
    ‘Cause I know I’m getting to old
    What I want to show is my life as my own
    But no matter what I say
    My way is way too early
    No matter what I say
    My way is way too early

    But It’s your time
    (uh)
    But It’s your time
    (uh)
    It’s your time
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    Not bad. I think the biggest thing you have to overcome in your poems is the forced rhyming. No offence, it just seems present in all your stuff. Besides that, good job.
     
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    Stonecold

    Stonecold Your Portal To Everything Cool!

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    nice one....but take esaul17's advice into consideration
     

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