--------Something Real-------- i fear what i am ought to be is close to something real ive closed my eyes now i cant see need some time to heal i need to seperate i need something to feal i fear what i have fought to be is close to something real you are what i hate what i hold so close im picking me to be the one to conquor all your lies i fear what i am ought to be is close to something real ive closed my eyes now i cant see need some time to heal i need to seperate i need something to feal i fear what i have fought to be is close to something real the emptyness inside is crushing me to death my broken and bones and propane blood is fuel for your hate flames these flames that choke my final breath i fear what i am ought to be is close to something real ive closed my eyes now i cant see need some time to heal i need to seperate i need something to feal i fear what i have fought to be is close to something real whats become of me these days i cant believe i took so long whats become of you these days i cant believe you did me like that i fear what i am ought to be is close to something real ive closed my eyes now i cant see need some time to heal i need to seperate i need something to feal i fear what i have fought to be is close to something real
---------- Untitled ---------- so many lies, so much deceit ive taken my last breath so much hurt, my mind is numb collapsed from broken truth the gridlocked pain from all your games has left my wounds too deep so this break up from your second face has left me in a heap one minute u act like im the one the next you play me like a fool u say u played me out like this just to forfil your dare the sickness and the violence have gone on for too long tjhe dark clouds have pulled over the battles have been won but my fight for some justice has only just begun one minute u act like im the one the next you play me like a fool u say u played me out like this just to forfil your dare i need a cure for the fear a cure for the pain all your games and sick deceit are driving me insane your hurt your pain they are my cancer but killing me is not the answer i willl play you for the fool and watch u die in all my vain one minute u act like im the one the next you play me like a fool u say u played me out like this just to forfil your dare hey ive been through alot recently just shut the #### up and stay away u know who u are dammit i cant stress how much u hurt me
---------- Pain Inside ---------- I Wonder When The Pain Will Go I Wonder When You'll Leave I Need Some Theropy A Remedy For All The Pain I Need Some Time To Heal Cuz Time Makes Me Grow Insane The Hurt The Pain The Suffering I Did It All For You But All I Know Is These Numb Wounds And The Story Thats Behind Them I Wonder When The Pain Will Go I Wonder When You'll Leave I Need Some Theropy A Remedy For All The Pain I Need Some Time To Heal Cuz Time Makes Me Grow Insane This Pain Inside Is Cancerous This Pain Inside Is Vicious I Wish U Would Go Away I Wish U Would Go Away I Wish U Would GO I Wonder When The Pain Will Go I Wonder When You'll Leave I Need Some Theropy A Remedy For All The Pain I Need Some Time To Heal Cuz Time Makes Me Grow Insane
i dont know what i should think of you know youve broken your promise youve left me wide open i dont know if i can trust you again im hurting inside now deep under the surface [Chorus] i feel like this pain will never end when will the wounds close up when will you make a mend my thoughts and actions inside my head the words and phrases that you said my head is like a rotting scar gang-green in the pain i feel a touch of jelousy running through my vain im empty now cant you see all i want is for one last breath [Chorus] i feel like this pain will never end when will the wounds close up when will you make a mend my thoughts and actions inside my head the words and phrases that you said i cant feel anymore youve curtained me over i cant take the pain i cant deal with it i cant deal with it i cant feel anymore youve sacraficed me down i cant take the pain i cant deal with it i cant deal with it [Chorus] i feel like this pain will never end when will the wounds close up when will you make a mend my thoughts and actions inside my head the words and phrases that you said
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[Verse 1] i must hold the memorys untill i make it stop have to grab on and keep the darkened thoughts by myself i stand strong together we will fall connected together we wont last long [Chrous] all alone in my corner as i feel my heartbeat burn the light is clutching me longer than my mind wanted too [Verse 2] why did i stay and churn the hurt everything falls apart in the end with the blackness i try not to flirt but i feel so faithless so ######' empty [Chrous] all alone in my corner as i feel my heartbeat burn the light is clutching me longer than my mind wanted too
Fallin down to the ground i cant seem to wake up this ground and the space that it takes up to the floor hit my head when im fallin tryin to run when youve been crawlin is this the end not yet - kill my enemys I have been beaten too much.? [Chrous] I cant move on i cant give in this is only what i want i cant push on this going on and on i cant move back my mind has fallen of its track this is only what i fear this time drags on - i need some time to heal i cant beleive that your crumbling me difficulty - have problems with breathing im dying cant you see but under the light im what im ment to be now i go I cant move on i cant give in this is only what i want i cant push on this going on and on i cant move back my mind has fallen of its track this is only what i fear this time drags on - i need some time to heal And i too much pain to replace the name i just have to play the same old game i want to go i want to leave no more tricks up my sleeve its the end of the track no more looking back I cant move on i cant give in this is only what i want i cant push on this going on and on i cant move back my mind has fallen of its track this is only what i fear this time drags on - i need some time to heal i cant move on i cant give in i cant push on i cant move back
---------- Death Is Nothing Compaired To You ---------- people pass me in the street heads are high above their feet who the #### started this race i would run just to see your face when the curtains of lies they fall they bring down the truth and tell you all people will ask you their names as they die people will ask you why you made them cry death is all around and it kills us with pain but if there was no hurt would u still be sane? the hurt the pain the smoke of the lies will choke you to death life is a test you'll die like the rest people pass me in the street heads are high above their feet who the #### started this race i would run just to see your face people ask me if im satusfied but im not untill you've cried your lies and pain and hurt and shame my truth my love my care you played me like an idiot and threw me to the ground so all of my hurt is poured in my sound people pass me in the street heads are high above their feet who the #### started this race i would run just to see your face im lost again im hurt again its all the same when i hear your name you lied to me u brought me down so who the #### are you to act like your the one people will shunt you after their done people pass me in the street heads are high above their feet who the #### started this race i would run just to see your face written by Stick N' Move / Titch
[Intro] The Pain Wont Go Away [Verse 1] People Cry And People Fall I Stand Aside And Watch You All You All Come And Pass Me Bye I Just Stand And Watch You Go [Chorus] Is It A Surprise To You When People Leave Is It A Shock To You When People Hate All This Rebellion Inside Our Lives We Fill The Void With Guns And Knives [Verse 2] Those Who Enflict Pain And Leave Me Here Disgarded Your Games And Hurt Leaves Me Bombarded My Mind Has Thoughts That Tear Me Apart But Ive Been Brain-dead Right From The Start [Chorus] Is It A Surprise To You When People Leave Is It A Shock To You When People Hate All This Rebellion Inside Our Lives We Fill The Void With Guns And Knives [Bridge] When You Witness Life Through My Eyes You Will Understand That People Come And People Go Right Across This Land The Youth Of My Life Is Wasted On You The Youth Of Our Lives Are Wasted On You [Chorus] Is It A Surprise To You When People Leave Is It A Shock To You When People Hate All This Rebellion Inside Our Lives We Fill The Void With Guns And Knives Is It A Surprise Is It A Shock That People Run When They See Your Eyes
Well, some of the words you're spelling wrong. Other than that, I don;t think anything else is wrong.