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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by elie, Jun 6, 2003.

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    elie

    elie Well-Known Member

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    Inspired by my friend Gordon/DrGamez

    I lose spirit, I lose hope
    I lose judgement, I lack rope
    I lack slack, I like wine
    My love thou art divine

    My one, you my love, it scares me to think
    That your childlike witness may be gone in a blink
    I'm just thirteen, yet I know my feelings to be true
    I sacrifice all to you, within me, divine is you

    Just another poem please, another slick rythmic prose
    Yet a rose, a crumpled paper decomposed
    Yet a teen, what a gleem, in the eyes of the heart
    Through your rancid ranting...I rip a fart

    I hate you child, I love you love
    I could catch your beating heart within my glove
    I love you my girl, you're hotter than a melting chocolate swirl
    I hope you read my poem, before others read it and hurl

    And that chocolate swirl I bore to you, of which I bought with care
    Get's barfed up on your new shoes, and stuck in your preppy hair
    Suck my nose, suck my straw, we can drink slurpee's all night long
    Tis thou art Elie belong?

    With you my sweet, my Juliet at my feet
    I love you so, I love you Poe
    Edgar Allen Poe's Crow

    Again I say, I love you girl
    I'm not like the normal teen swirl
    I write this poem with love and care
    Divine effections, I love your hair!



    This is a rant to all the teen love crap I see. No offense to any who do write it, I just think it's silly sometimes. So sue me.
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    wow. great! i like your words.
     
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    elie

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    Thanks! :p
     

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