This song came to me in a dream where I was driving and Bob Dylan was in the back seat of my car. I don't really have a car, and I've never met Bob Dylan, but I wrote a song about it anyway. Give me an honest opinion of what you think, etc etc. * = rhythm change for the chorus -------- Sunshine So sure, you have stepped out of here Wearing the face you never wear Is that the way you want to go If you close your eyes you'll never know Sunshine has come and gone again I couldn't tell how long it's been Nobody wanted like you did Is that the way you want to live? *Did you think your life was heaven sent? Did you change the lighting before you left? Well I couldn't say where you've gone But I know that I'll be moving on Was I just as bad to believe your show? Well you've found your place, we can only hope But I can't explain why you came around Speaking the language that brought you down But am I a crutch or am I a voice? When goodbye will never be my first choice You only believe in the bittersweet But you never found that side of me *Did you think this time was just a gift? Well how did you feel when it came to this? No one can say how it got so hard But I know of much better ways to start
I think it's great the way everything fits together but i don't see the like with the dream you had to me that's not so important cause i like the song ...
Thanks for the compliments, both of you! St0f - The words in the song are what I imagine Bob Dylan was saying. I might be crazy, but it was good inspiration. Mali - I try to make it rhyme without making it too obvious. Thanks again.
Thanks! You always have great stuff to say about my writing. Mali does too. Nice people, the both of you.
Thanks again! Should I let you know when they are sung? If this folk band ever gets our act together, we'll be using this.
Yes, please let me know. It's a beautiful song and will be even more beautiful as a sung song. (That didn't make too much sense but you get it, right?)
Nice words man i might use it as a song ill put music to it bro. ill then try to make a powertab file and then post it up powertab kinda converts midi music so yea... um that if ure ok wit it bro?
First of all, I've already stated that I am making my own folk song out of this with my own folk band. No, you can not use it. Second of all, if you cared to look at the information right underneath my name and avatar, I am not a "man" or a "bro" so please don't call me that. That having been said, thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I'd say that's letting him off easy, it might just be a set of lyrics but plagerism is a sueable offence.