"This Punctuation-Related Injury"

"This Punctuation-Related Injury Could've Been Prevented if I Had Writer's Block"

she said that i'm ridiculous,
she said she meant it in a good way.

i guess it's true.

i'm trying to get this right,
'cause i'm ridiculous like that.

i try to search for the right things to say
but i trip over the formatting
and all the symbols pierce my skin
causing a punctuation-related injury.

the doctors said they didn't know what to do
when i stumbled into the emergency room
dangling my participles
and holding on to the right words.

they directed me down the hallway
and i ended up in a dr. seuss book
filled with ridiculous rhymes
that made me feel like i was on acid.

maybe that's what she meant
when she said i was ridiculous;
maybe i'm a dr. seuss book --
childish and cute,
and not a person someone would want.

the exclamation point
at the end of her voice
stabbed me in the eye
and i couldn't see for days.

this movie could be the way we live our lives
if we really wanted to
but we've got to take that first step
and kill mike meyers for playing the cat in the hat
and shrek,
though unrelated,
and pretend that the mystical,
fantasy world that dr. seuss created is real life
and that real life is just as happy.

she's always on my mind
which is more than i can say
for the red fish and blue fish
that are consulting with each other right now,
trying to determine what to do with my
question mark-induced injury.

because all i've done is ask questions
and not even to the person
they should be directed to.

i've held conversations with myself
and those run-on sentences
can take a toll on one's sanity after a while.

she said that i'm ridiculous,
she said she meant it in a good way --
maybe it's true,
since i'm just trying to get this right,
'cause i'm ridiculous like that.

yeah, 'cause i'm ridiculous like that.​

 

that was really good will i like it a lot

 

I don't see any problems or things I need to comment on here (negative things, I mean), but I'll say this; I love it.

 

Awesome

 

It was nice. There are some grammer errors, and you could use caps.

 

I'm pretty sure there are no grammar errors besides the capitalization, but that's my new style -- no caps.

But thanks for the comments everyone.

 

Well other than what I said, I liked it