These are lyrics that I wrote for a folk song. Tell me what you think, and be completely honest. Offer suggestions if you'd like to. Or whatever. *Rhythm changes for the chorus. -------- So many words I have forgotten I wish I had cared to say And all the targets I was shooting I was aiming the wrong way Now this minimal achievement Is just a fraction of the truth It's the monumental faulure That's been getting through to you *Let the long days pass Because the years will go twice as fast And if you trip down the road You know I never did take this back Well all that pride that I had taken In my words, they were mistaken I have lied so many times You'd think that I'd be sick of faking Being clean I thought was helping But I let it go to waste And I won't deny the fact that I Liked throwing it away *When our ashtray is full It will be understandable I think you always have known There are much harder strings to pull So we're on the road I guess that's how we'll always be But I don't think you know You've been the much better half of me -------- Thanks for reading.
Aw, thank you both. You guys are so nice. Joe - I'll look through my notebook and see if I can find anything else good.