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Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by erasethepain, Jun 3, 2003.

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    erasethepain

    erasethepain Well-Known Member

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    Nobody replied to my last two songs so I doubt they will this time but oh well...

    (Verse 1)
    She stands there on stage,
    Waiting, for whatever happens next,
    Just wishing she could go home,
    And finally find it in herself to slit her wrists

    (Chorus)
    Everyone knows her name,
    Her name, the one nobody mentions,
    She has no one to go to,
    Cause not even her father listens
    All they do is fight,
    It doesn't even feel like a family anymore
    What does she have to come home to?
    Cause even her father calls her a whore

    (Verse 2)
    And as she stands there on stage,
    Humiliation, eats away until there's nothing left
    Everybody said it was just a faze,
    But they'll never know until she decides to take her last breath

    (Chorus)
    Everyone knows her name,
    Her name, the one nobody mentions,
    She has no one to go to,
    Cause not even her father listens
    All they do is fight,
    It doesn't even feel like a family anymore
    What does she have to come home to?
    Cause even her father calls her a whore

    (Bridge)
    She might aswell not even open her eyes,
    Cause she's afraid of everything in front of her
    So afraid she can't even get this over with
    Afraid of the pain she's forced to endure

    (Verse 3)
    And as she stands there by herself,
    With the thought that it's finally over,
    She waits for tommorow,
    Hoping that she can finally move forward
    But just as she thinks the pain's all gone,
    Everything, everything ends up going wrong
     
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    Crazy.Desperate.Insane

    Crazy.Desperate.Insane Well-Known Member

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    It's good.. Hmm.. I wonder how it sounds like.. :rolleyes:

    Where are your other 2 songs? I want to read them..

    Keep writing..


    P.S I hope people will post about political and society issues..
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    good.
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

    [Darken Hybrid] Ambient

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    that's good words put together.

    I'll br sure to check your other 2s.
     

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