It's called fiction. If this story was about me that would mean I'm 43, with a wife and a kid, both brutually murdered and that I work in a construction yard. Sometimes it requires common sense dear. Thanks for the compliment though...
ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm sure it'll be great :whistle:
lol. PEOPLE, I WAS KIDDING!!!! god, lol. & yes i would like chapter 3 please. --chants-- CHAP-TER 3, CHAP-TER 3, CHAP-TER 3!!
No... You weren't. Damnit Derek, drop whatever you're doing right now and give us chapter 3!!! :whistle:
Note: Read this while listening to "From The Inside" by Linkin Park. It goes sooooooooo good. AHHHH, the action has commenced!!! ::High-fives Derek:: Badass, buddy...just badass!! B)
wow......chills, man, chills..........but i thought it was EXCELLENT!!!!!! & good use w/ the swears. i liked those.
Chapter 4 up. All chapters will now be in the first post of this thread to conserve space. I hope you enjoy Chapter 4. I made it bloody for you.
Goodness gracious. This had to be the best chapter yet!!! Good points: * How you don't immediately continue this chapter where the last one left off and how you continue it later. * The tension I could feel between the main character and the 2 killers. * The dialogue! Just great! The last line of this chapter really does some justice! * The Dry Cell song. Bad points: ? Derek, you are the man, brotha!
As a bonus. Chapter 5 is now up, ending Season 1. A little surprize is in store for you at the end of the chapter. Yes, it's been planned for some time now . Bet you didn't expect it?
OMG!! Derek and Omar, you guys!!! I can't believe it!! Hahahahaha, this is going great!!! What a way to end the season. I need to go read the latest in Copper's tales. Derek, believe me when I say these get better every time.