Alibi

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    Ether

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    Alibi
    A darkened room is where he retires
    An overwhelming world is that which aspires
    Not a single day goes by, where he sits and he thinks
    Not one single hour without his blood in the sink

    He is always searching for something more
    Always closing all those open doors
    Always trying to cover the stains
    Though suffering from that, but that differs from pain

    He’s a shape shifter of the darkened night
    For him right is wrong and the wrong often right
    Blurred vision, hot hands that single choking thought
    Is all that keeps this shifter from being caught

    The sinful crime that sleeps in his head
    A constant reminder as he lies in his bed
    An alibi that won’t hold true
    A simple justification that didn’t pull through

    He needs to be shown the right way out
    But no ones got the time to care about
    His daily problems that wear him down
    They dig his grave in this selfish ground

    Two days, two hours, two seconds from death
    He asks for nothing more, he asks for nothing less
    But to wash his soul of what he has done
    He takes the same knife and chooses to succumb

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    Wrote this early one morning after a heavy night on the grog, what you think?
     
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    El Muerto

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    It's really emotional, I love it
     
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    Linja

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    You have great talent, this is beautiful.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    I really liked it too. Very emotional and it seemed like much thought went into it. Like always, this was wonderful.
     
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    Ether

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    Thanks you three. I did take a bit longer on this one as some of it was built on my own feelings during the time I wrote it. I keep this piece close to my heart. Thanks again for your comments :D
     

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