Her World Goes Red

Here is my latest. Tell me what you think.

http://esaul17.sitesled.com/Her World Goes Red.htm

 

That was good dude, im guessing your are writing from experience of that situation?

 

Thanks. And yes, this is about one of my friends.

 

kool, lets just say I know what you are both going through. Thought of showing her the piece?

 

I never said it was about her, but I showed it to her (I kind of had to becuse I wanted he permission to put it on the internet. I promised I wouldn't tell anyone about the problem.) She just said it was "as depressing as fuck" and that was all.

 

this is awesome very detailed