Memories

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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    This will seem familiar to you, because I posted it in the Lyrics Competition we had earlier. This was under my former name, 'torn rose'. Enjoy. ^_^

    Memories

    She’s running again
    She doesn’t want to see him
    Rotting
    She’s running again
    From the memories

    She remembers his eyes
    Chocolate brown starred with grey
    She remembers his voice
    A smooth, liquid baritone
    But that is all she has
    Memories

    They may have seemed like polar opposites
    Argued like it was an apocalypse
    But they fit each other perfectly

    She remembers his hands
    Strumming his guitar
    Stroking her hair
    She remembers
    Memories

    He was always the vocal one
    Wore his emotions on his sleeve
    Aware that he was always the one to get hurt

    She remembers his features
    Beautiful, she used to call him
    She remembers his hair
    Dark, always gelled back
    But soft like finely spun silk
    But that is all she has
    Memories

    She knew that she loved him
    But didn’t know how much
    She knew that he loved her
    Enough for them both
    Enough to scare her off

    She didn’t know what to do
    When he said those words
    She wasn’t ready
    And he was willing to wait
    But she sensed that she’d hurt him
    Bruised his fragile heart
    The heart that now beats no more

    She remembers his kisses
    Little Eskimo nose kisses
    Everlasting kisses
    Each one was magical
    But the magic is gone
    She remembers his gifts
    Beautiful displays of eternal love
    Like the time he had filled her entire flat with rose petals
    The time he gave her the Claddagh ring
    Identical to the one he wore
    The one that was buried with him
    But that is all she has
    Memories

    She took a break for a while
    From him and his enchantments
    So that she could think about what she was getting into
    Before she dove in too deep

    She knew that he’d be waiting for her
    Not matter what
    They had made a promise
    Till death do they part

    Till Death

    She remembers his spirit
    Pure magic, pure love
    There was fear, of a life without love
    Of love unrequited
    A love that she was ready to give him

    She remembers his habits
    The tendency to pick up a cigarette when life got tough
    Although he tried to stop
    The tendency to drive too fast on the freeway
    When no one was around
    She remembers
    Memories

    She remembers his inspiration
    The musical urge he got when she was around
    Or when they had just made love
    The way he would look at her while writing a song
    A mixture of Awe and Love
    But that is all she can do
    Remember

    She was packing to return when she got the call
    An accident, it was said
    He was driving too fast on a dark night
    One of his habits
    Someone else came up
    He never saw it coming

    She remembers his music
    Haunting melodies about life and love
    And everything in between
    Music that rings in the corners
    Music that makes you remember
    The good times

    Memories



    Thanks for sticking it through. R&R and you get cookies.
     
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    Friskey™

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    Beautiful ^_^
     
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    Linja

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    Why thankees Friskey.

    *hands over two cookies*

    ... Because I owe you :lol:
     
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    Razan

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    I want cookies!

    I hate you, you made me read a poem about love now! It was so good it made me sad :lol:
     
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    Linja

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    :hugz: Love you too my useless minion. I'm glad I make you sa-. Wait, that's not good. :lol:
     
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    Razan

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    :hugz: Love you too my useless minion. I'm glad I make you sa-. Wait, that's not good. :lol: [/b][/quote]
    That's not good for me but great for you ^_^
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    Lol, this was awsome Mali, it's so beautiful and sad at the same time. Just great...........

    Keep it up......
     
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    El Muerto

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    I've already said everything I had to say about this one. :D
     
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    Oh snaps, this shits hot. :eek:
     
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    Snail

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    haha heshboy, that line reminds me of a quote from...Bromwell High....

    nice poem Mali !
     
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    Linja

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    Thanks for the comments, everyone ^_^



    A read and reviewed Mali is a happy Mali. :lol:
     

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