The War that took them forever

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    Another wound to try to heal,
    Another love to try to bind.

    Amongst the darkest of the nights,
    Amongst the soldiers ready to die.

    A suicide of our countries glory,
    A suicide of the people who won.

    In the shadows, of the shadows,
    In the lonely, heart of a soldier.

    He lies wanting to be found,
    He wants to open his eyes, but he can't.

    Holding his wound, as the blood falls out,
    Holding his life, in his hands.

    No one will come to find me, he thinks,
    No one cares who dies in this war.

    A family man, he once was,
    A family man, he got robbed of.

    They took him by the edge of a knife,
    They took them by the heart.

    Fighting for his country, imagine the pain,
    Fighting for his life, he lies there.

    In the mud, he wants the enemy to go,
    In the mud and debris, he is shattered by all.

    In this war, they took forever to destroy,
    In this war, they took what they had from eachother.
     
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    Theazninvasion68

    Theazninvasion68 It's like blood to a vampire, our tragic desire. LPA Super VIP

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    :eek: omg! this.poem.is. :eek:

    It's very deep and tells a lot..


    Worthy enough for my sig. ^_^
     
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    GrafiTTied

    GrafiTTied Well-Known Member

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    that was the coolest. (w00t)
    i absolutely loved it!!
    im starting to become a fan of your work. :D
     
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    The Outsider

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    really :eek: ???
     
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    Theazninvasion68

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    :( ^_^ Really, go check!
     
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    GrafiTTied

    GrafiTTied Well-Known Member

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    i dont know if this was directed to me, but if it was................................
    REALLY!
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    oh holy crap !! ^_^
    it was that god damn good?

    THANKS ALL !!

    :hugz: :hugz:
     
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    It was OK. For me the ending wasnt to good.
     

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