Hollow I hurt myself again and I'm still... Wait for another chance to hurt myself, So I can bleed some more, You loved my constant facade of pain, Guess these words still sound kinda lame, Keep on lying, keep on drowning, I'll still be there when everyone else is gone, After all this time, I'm so hollow inside, After all this time, I'm still hollow inside, Shut up so I can spit you out, You'll still leave a bitter taste behind, Just like the pills we did when we were young, These things I do to numb the pain, My hell is here can you guess it's name, Say the words, Say goodbye, I'm not here anymore I've broken again, After all this time, I'm so hollow inside, After all this time, I'm still hollow inside, After all this time, I'm so hollow inside, After all this time, I'm still hollow inside, ...Hollow. thoughts please...
I agree with what other people have said, it's good, and would probably make a great song, but it isn't anything that is super original and fantastic, i've seen you write better.
yeah, this was more testing the waters, as i haven't wriiten in awhile...hope the next one is better...