I Fear Love.

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    joking with ya, ladies...

    I Fear Love.


    You’ve got me where you’ve wanted,
    I love you for what you’ve never done,
    And now I’m steadily haunted,
    By the way you’ve come undone.
    I don’t want to hold you,
    But you pull me closer, why?
    It’s too tempting to feel you,
    I don’t even want to try.
    The dust chokes me as I try to breathe,
    The rushing dusk calls on us,
    Every sense of you starts to appeal,
    Your touch, a sign of mistrust.
    Don’t make me do this,
    It’s never too late to stop,
    You know it’s not just a kiss,
    You’ll scream before you drop.
    Please, it’s not why I love you,
    It’s going to end a tragic story,
    You’ll make me do something I don’t want to,
    Falling, I feel the raging fury.
    A knife, a splash of ruddy seduction,
    I plead but you never did care,
    I kill before I’m enslaved by temptation,
    I runaway, while you’re wet and bare.


    :innocent:
    :innocent:
    :innocent:
     
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    Ronin

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    ^_^ thats awesome dude!
     
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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    pretty good but at the same time i find offense by the last few lines.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    did you feel offended?... :unsure:


    thanks for the comments ^_^


    EDIT:thanks mali...what would this world be without you? ;)
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Arhaz, mate... it's offended, not offenced.

    But anyway... This poem scares me, but it's still very good. I'm terrified of you now Arhaz. Stay away. :lol:
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    :hugz: Mwahahahahaaaaa...

    :lol:


    you should be afraid of me only if you ever seduct me... :chemist:
     

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