Demo Tank

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    saunderitos

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    Demo tank


    Look at the dirt
    Rotten and inert
    What you devour
    That makes you feel sour

    Destroy the flow
    Wrong way to go
    Takin’ the pill
    That keeps you still

    [Men admit to
    Mistakes and spites
    So in the end
    It finishes all right] Chorus

    Million crowd
    Batter my ground
    Break your habit
    You never had it

    Drop the fake talk
    Eyes like a hawk
    Nothing to do now
    But stand there and bow

    []Chorus

    Nothing to do now
    But stand there and bow



    what do you think of it?
     
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    heshboy

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    It's nice short, simple, and great. I like it.
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks

    more comments :D
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Awesome job
    ;)
     
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    Rod

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    Nice poem i liked.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    It was simple but it sounded good, nice job.
     
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    saunderitos

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    thanks for all your comments :p
     
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    Ether

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    *touches poem* OUCH SHIT THAT POEM IS HAWT!!! *runs away sucking on finger*
     

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