Lonely Longing.

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Lonely Longing.

    At times when I feel down, I remember how you’d smiled at me, expecting so much,
    The winter didn’t get to the warmth you gave me with a single finger’s touch.
    I try to remember how you’d dance wayward and try to amuse me,
    And how you’d show me the beauty of the things around me, and the things I couldn’t see.

    It was all so beautiful; it was all so great, until the day it all ended,
    We were meant for each other, there was so much yet undone, I can’t comprehend it.

    I can’t look at the beauty of the sky every morning without your wakening smile,
    I can’t breathe even if I wanted to; it seems harder to cross every mile,
    We’d lay bare feet for hours on the sand, awaiting a whimsical cool wave,
    Everything that we did seems to haunt me, seems to kill me everyday.

    It was all so beautiful; it was all so great, until the day it all ended,
    We were meant for each other, there was so much yet undone, I can’t comprehend it.

    Just a word, just a line, just a mockery to remind,
    How I loved, every hug, that you gave me every time,
    And no meaning, has my life anymore,
    All I want is the days we had before.



    comments please...
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Brilliant. *applause* Brilliant, Arhazter. (Don't kill me for that)
     
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    heshboy

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    Great stuff, I really liked the endind...alot! :lol:
     
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    _J4n|nH4_

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    :hmm: You made This Everything Alone? It is Much Cool......... (w00t) :bounce:
     
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    GrafiTTied

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    well i dont know if i should be happy or sad....................
    but its good like always!!
     
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    .epitome.of.irony.

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    such detailed lines.very heartwarming.
     
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    Arhaz

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    thanks....comments, positive or negative, are always appreciated... ^_^
     

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