The Girls That Break Our Hearts Are People Too

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    Dedicated

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    Note: The chorus may look a little clumsy or whatever, but it sounds exactly how I want it to in my head, that being, like, FFAF stylee.

    Hopefully you like this set of lyrics :)

    "The Girls That Break Our Hearts Are People Too"

    I've seen the look that's in your eyes before,
    Somewhere else on someone else in a movie,
    Right before they kiss,
    The look of longing hangs suspended between us,
    So lean in closer 'cause I know this time's the time we cannot miss...

    Hesitant, lovers eyes,
    Burning slowly, from inside,
    And I love you (And I love you...)
    And I love, all the little things we do, together,
    But forever, always remember,
    That the little things (Little things)(And I love you...)
    Are the things that keep us going through the night.

    I think I've fallen in love before,
    But this time I know it's true, please believe me,
    Right before we kiss,
    And I'm just hoping that you are thinking the same thing,
    I was watching you with my eyes open, but now they're closed and I'm kissing your lips...

    Hesitant, lovers eyes,
    Burning slowly, from inside,
    And I love you (And I love you...)
    And I love, all the little things we do, together,
    But forever, always remember,
    That the little things (Little things)(And I love you...)
    Are the things that keep us going through the night.

    That's when I saw you with him (that's when I saw you with him)
    That's when I saw you with him (that's when I saw you with him)
    That's when I saw you with him (that's when I saw you with him)
    That's when you broke my heart, you broke it, fuck it hurts.

    Hesitant, lovers eyes,
    Burning slowly, from inside,
    And I love you (And I love you...)
    And I love, all the little things we did, together,
    Not forever, always remember,
    That the little things (Little things)(And I love you...)
    Were the things that kept me going through the night.
     
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    Linja

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    It's really, really, really emo-y good. Chocopies and marshmallows to you.
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's awesome...really really awesome... :eek:
     
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    GrafiTTied

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    im not really into stuff like that......but i have got say thats real NEAT!! :D
     
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    Luke

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    When you showed it to me on MSN I thought it was good but after seeing the finished thing I can honestly say this is disgusting...............................................ly good :lol:

    Great job as always man :)
     
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    saunderitos

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    :unsure: i didnt like it sorry


    :eek: you could come up with something way better
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks for the comments :)


    @sauderitos, tbh, I'm not too fond of the last part of that. I need to change it :lol:, thanks for the input :)
     
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    El Muerto

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    Pure emo man :lol:
     
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    Evan™

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    nice....i like it...sort of....
     
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    heshboy

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    Awwww you've turned emo!! ha...On topic, I can see you're dedicated to great writing. Great job Dedicated.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks for the comments :)
     

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