Fate

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Fate

    Dangerous and quite unexpected
    Like a shot
    And as cold as ice
    Fate will come to meet you
    Cutting off behind you
    All retreats and breaking down the bridges to escape

    Above you stands the sky
    That has no refuge
    Below you lies the earth
    And the helpless bones in dirt
    And left and right
    Share cliffs rise up
    And you have your memories
    All without mercy
    Neither in you
    Not yet outside you
    Do you have anywhere to go?
     
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    heshboy

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    I will say this before I forget. This is really good, and I love it.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Sorry Dusan, but i didn't really like this, you've written so much better than this. I know you can do better.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    I'm sorry to say but i think he's right.
     

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