Words to heal

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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    Here you go

    I am passing them
    Everybody that thought I was asking them
    I was getting by them by manipulation
    Bought me a drink and kept on asking when
    I wasn’t there to be drastic
    You can on keep begging me for someting to see
    But you won’t get anything back fantasticly
    I am elastic and putting every word in plastic
    Wrapping it up and only giving it to those who are masked in sin
    Stone Statues wanting to be made of gold
    They’re so old that they forgot what they were told in bold
    Covered from head to toe in stories that would make your mind blow
    It’s crazy how they need some words of encouragement
    If I didn’t give it to them then their insides would still be hurting
    But I am hurting just knowing that sin has covered their body
    Draped them in a curtain needing somebody
    Torched from the inside
    Memories beginning to collide
    I am trying to persuade them with words I provide
    In time they will be healed of their darkness inside
    Dividing them from the sins that clouded their judgment
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I don't think this poem was focused enough. It just seemed to be missing that link to a common theme, that's what i thought.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    I thougth it was ok.
     

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