Blind

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by The Outsider, Sep 30, 2005.

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    Slowly I open my eyes,
    Look around in seach of questions.

    Only if i could see your tears,
    Only if i had my eyes.

    Behind a wall of darkness,
    Behind a wall of night skies.

    Touch you but you are far away,
    Reach for you but you had to go.

    Leave me behind this wall,
    Of questions and this darkness.

    I know you can see me,
    I know I cannot see you.

    I can feel you glide across the room,
    I can feel your tear drop on me.

    Try to catch your pearl tears,
    But I don't know where you are.

    We know our love is strong,
    We know we'll survive.

    But the devil has my eyes from now on,
    The angels have me ears today.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    It was pretty good, i felt it could have been ended better though.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    feel the same, it could have ended better. but great job none the less... ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    Good stuff.
     

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