well i now this is nothing compared to all you poets out there but id like to make my mark here too......... so here's one of mine- TRAUMATIZE: (D.R.M) The power of dreams has no extremes Its limits are as far as the galaxies. But what happens when it all comes down Like a tower of crumbling cards And the light has burnt out from your stars When you find you have lost your rhyme Look around and find yourself lost in time Nothing to keep your sights on, Nothing to support your once strong iron Now it rusts and soon will disintegrate into its once natural dust form. Now shall I live without visions and aspirations? No precisions, no decisions Put my life into the hands of someone else To be molded into something else Likes and dislikes of my incarnate Forces me to impersonate Struggle to find myself again, Again and again, but in vain Soon I shall retreat and be void of all senses A life bound to blurred with powerful lenses I look up, my eyes with colors of white and gray Stricken with neutrality, despairs prey. So long, you shall see no more of me An idol loved by everyone, But hated by me. tell me what you think of it??