The End

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    The End

    Angel's, all these fallen angels,
    And no soul left to claim,
    Hurt, the knife always hurts,
    With no-one left to blame,
    Scream, In pain I scream,
    To get some clarity from you,
    Hope, Why do I still have hope,
    The blurred line that is the truth,

    All the pain,
    All the lies,
    Everything hidden behind these eyes,
    All your failings,
    All your cries,
    Does everything you do make me die,

    Broken, My heart strings broken,
    The white becoming red again,
    Tears, Shedding tears of acid,
    To stop the flow from the vein,
    Pretending, Pretending to accept everything,
    Just so you can push me down,
    Poison, Poison are your words,
    Now in pestilence I drown,

    All the pain,
    All the lies,
    Everything hidden behind these eyes,
    All your failings,
    All your cries,
    Does everything you do make me die,

    Yet everything comes to an end,
    Everyone fails and fades away,
    Yet all you do will break in your hands,
    Every good thing in your life leaves in the end,

    When I cry I know that i'm alive,
    When I cry I know that i'm alive,
    When I cry I know that i'm alive,

    Yet everything comes to an end,
    Everyone fails and fades away,
    Yet all you do will break in your hands,
    Every good thing in your life leaves in the end.


    haven't written in awhile, thoughts please...
     
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    heshboy

    heshboy Well-Known Member

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    I love it. Great work 9.2/10.
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    thanks
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    Pretty great.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    That was marvelous.
     

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