The Asignment

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    Luke

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    I wrote this about a year and a half ago and posted it on LPA about 10 months ago but I found it the other day and worked on it abit and heres the final piece of lyrics:

    The Asignment (Remastered)

    We're in the sky
    In a plane at night
    Our parachutes a'ready
    preparing for the fight
    When we hit ground
    Our mission is to kill
    Ignore the white flags
    And let the blood spill
    Take over the city
    Kill all who oppose
    Make laws of our own
    Seal off all the exit roads
    Capture the leader
    And sell it to the press
    Capture civilians
    And make them confess
    This is our job
    That we are told to do
    I hate this so much
    I wanna be with you

    oh...
    I see demons all around me
    They all surround me
    I must be in hell
    I was assigned to this place
    Because of the disgrace
    That’s called a president

    My best freinds dead
    As we move down the land
    Another fight's brewing
    The time is at hand
    Time to get my gun
    From my blood soaked bag
    A picture of you
    Is all that I have
    I see other troops
    On the side of the lane
    Burning all the bodies
    Of all the people they've blown away
    The thickness of the air
    Gives us all the smell
    Of the burning of souls
    As we drive down a road in hell

    oh...
    I see demons all around me
    They all surround me
    I must be in hell
    I was assigned to this place
    Because of the disgrace
    That’s called a president

    Its too late to turn back now
    Its too late to rewrite the wrongs
    Its too late to say sorry
    Its all too late

    And they say its glorious to die for your country?
    Well its not as good as they say

    oh...
    I see demons all around me
    They all surround me
    I must be in hell
    I was assigned to this place
    Because of the disgrace
    That’s called a president

    Its not as good as they say
    Its not as good as they say
    Its not good to die when you’re already in hell!
     
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    The Outsider

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    really powerful images here ^_^
     
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    Linja

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    This is beautiful. But... some spelling errors.
    The Title: Asignment; assignment
    freinds; friend's

    Edit: All in all it's a wonderful set of lyrics.
     
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    Arhaz

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    oh man, Mali... :lol:


    awesomely fantastically greatly superb job. i love it a lot! ^_^
     
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    Thanks for the comments ^_^

    And its set a set of lyrics and not a poem ;)
     
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    Mali, you will never rise up to the great grammar natzi's standards so quit it, it's so annoying! :lol: Then again, you always loved to be the annoying one.

    "And they say its glorious to die for your country?
    Well its not as good as they say"
    There are loads of amazing lines in this piece of work. It reminds me of American Dream Denial from SOAD. That could be an insult to you, but I mean it as a compliment :D
    I would give this 10/10 ^_^
    There are so many different perspectives here, almost universal.

    Summary: It kicked ass!
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks Raz ^_^

    I havn't heard that SOAD song but I take it as a compliment :lol:
     
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    Sweet :D


    As I said on MSN, I found it a tad hard to get a flow from it, but I think it's just because I can't rap :p

    Keep up the good work and get that damn collab done! :lol:
     
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    Luke

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    Yes sir, right away sir.

    *Goes and plots Dedicated's death*

    Oh shit did I say that out loud...on a forum?

    SHUT UP HELLFLAME

    Now I'm talking to myself

    :whistle:

    :lol:

    Cheers :)
     
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    :lol: :lol: :lol:


    Damn you! Now I've gotta go think of a way to escape death and expose you as the villain you really are!!!



    *Walks off*
     
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    Luke

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    You'll never expose me because...........................

    *Runs away to Timbuktoo*


    :lol:
     
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    Great work like always.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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