Can I have you ?

Can I have you?


Can I have you? To love and to hold
Your undying beauty make my mind fold
Can I have you? To touch you and know
That I’m the only one you show

Wind chimes remind me of the sea
The waves crash on the shores
The seamen sing about their loves
That they lost to the job of men

I will not lose you easily
I will hold on to destiny
This is not obsession
Rather infatuation

Can I have you? To love and to cherish
So that I’m complete and have nothing to wish
I cover the world in string
To touch you and to hear you sing

The earth echoes in my ear
Slow but meaningful
Don’t push me away
please
please



please.

 

I LOVE IT!

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I HATE YOU!

 

This great work, Just keep upping your game. B)

 

I must agree, it is very differnet to what you often and how you often write but it's really good, I definately think it's one of your best. Great work.

 

Pretty cool, me likes.

 

thanks for all your comments

 

Awsome.


P.S- you can't have me.

 

YOU CAN HAVE ME!.......especially when you write something like that!!

 

you said something more than just what you thought of it LoL

thanks for your comments,they mean alot to me