R.A.P (first verse)

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    saunderitos

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    lol


    fun battle though :)
     
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    Ether

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    Good work Minus Xero, you ought to be comended! It was fun while it lasted...but now saunderitos has a new opponent....

    In the right corner we have the almighty, all powerful, rap rampent Saunderitos!!!!

    In the left corner we have the challenger....simple flowing, keeping the shit going....Heshboy!!!

    On my mark guys, lets get this battle of minds going!

    Mark! :teehee: :D
     
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    saunderitos

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    lol :bounce:


    lets go


    Heshboy,you're new to the game
    All my shit's different, but yours is the same
    You're raps are a joke like Bob Newhart
    I pick out your flaws but thats just the start
    You go against after I helped you out
    Shot in the back like a pre-war kraut (No racism intended!!!)
    So if you wanna battle me get up on stage
    To me it's a platform but to you it's a cage.
     
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    Arhaz

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    could i barge in?/knowing you're thin/ i'll spit it out from within/ right from my home and kin/time to fall off the stage/ go get your petty wage/ you can't burst it off with rage/ calm down and jump out/scream and try to shout/ a fall out/ you can't sprout/ like my dad had said/ everyone is mislead/ the honourable dead/ like 2 pac and the rest/ nibbling your blanket in your nest/ originality facing threat/ out battling for their blood with knives/ bullets, brains and their lives...


    not good enough...but i had fun ^_^
     
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    saunderitos

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    two :p

    this is how i attack,by bringing it back
    Two guys on me,just might make me snap
    To attempt to win you need you and your crew
    I need some guys to beat and thats you two
    Fame doesn't mean that you're good at the game
    Check out 50 'cause his shit is lame
    I go by melee ,i'm dropping my name
    But I am a true, you guys are the same
    You wanna get 3 rappers that think they are good?
    I'll still kick shit so I think that you should
     
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    Pretty good.
     
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    Ether

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    right...stuff watching, count me in....

    You want to know what its all about
    Well raise your hands, lets hear you shout
    I come from the back and step to the front
    And mix each style to make you jump

    No matter who you are, just find the beat
    I make other rappers look like speak
    I'm master of the mind, I wreck your face
    While critics pull the blind, I take your place

    Im the E in the sea of rap
    The T in the time collapse
    Give the H to the left
    And the E to the right
    But the R puts me on the map!

    My man Saunderitos he knows this game
    He knows what he's saying, it's not the same
    Together our crap will kill your spines
    Together our rap will prove our lines

    So take it to the edge you trash
    While we sit down and watch you crash
    My pin push rhymes will jump the switch
    And Saunderitos' skill will bite you BITCH!
     
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    heshboy

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    I'll post later on in the game because I am knee deep in the game
    Our shit may be the same, but my shits insane
    Stuck in a Cage?
    You must not of got laid, becuase you forgot to pay the babe that was screeming my name
    This is the last verse because your hurt is getting worse and worse
    But when I comeback later on, you better not be wearing a dress and carrying a purse(Just wearing a skirt)
    So for on the last time I am writing a verse





    Be on later guys.
     
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    heshboy

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    I didnt see this shit till after my sencond ryme
    This is the last time you talk about me in my prime
    My raps are dope, they make you choke everytime you're given blow
    So, give 50 my condolences becuase you both owe me after this show
    Your Fame has came and gone, and you need to find out what went wrong
    Get a new song that could put you back on
    Your shits fell off, and making every MC cough
    So you better get 3 rappers to help your verse, or get back in church
    I was given this rap gift back at birth
     
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    saunderitos

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    Havn't you learnt that you don't wanna battle me?
    Minus then hesh then freak and i count that as three
    Ether's standing with me,he's my main man
    And for you freak tries,and does what he can
    But Ether has skill and freak he does not
    His awesome ryhmes causings deadly blood clot
    You use your brain to rhyme,but i use my spine
    In other words my raps are great and they're a reflex rhyme
    So now i'll ask you, you still wanna battle
    I'll move you like a herd of poisoned cattle
    So now it's time for me to finish
    This is the answer to your wish
     
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    Arhaz

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    wish ain't none, battle and grow up to be some-one,
    get a kick in the verbal world, you're falling down, hurled,
    a crazy time mastered with crazy rhymes, and you stuff's a crime,
    an oral tragedy, a catastrophy, signs of apocalypse dawning on thee,
    share the word, of everything absurd, creating a realm containing your verse,
    go get it rehearsed, pleading to last for longer, bleeding when you're failing to be stronger,
    misjudged, and not a lie, someone's gotta go, farewell goodbye,
    it's time the venom came from my side, someone's gotta fail, losers cry.
    don't battle with the whack you have, don't battle with the skills you lack,
    tryin to join on a pointless track, that leads upto hell and victory,
    and way down below, or are you just lucky to be beside me?
     
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    saunderitos

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    You counter attack still fails to impress me
    You're not that bad,but try and repress me
    I want you to go all out killin'
    Not your crappy lines fillin'
    Go 100 percent to try and beat me
    Try it all,try and kill thee
    I go 10 percent and still i kick shit
    Then i go 5 'cause i'm fed up of it
    I want a worthy fighter
    Not some crack on an all-nighter
    I'm keepin' it smooth flowin' out the mic
    See the differnce, My tank ,your bike
     
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    heshboy

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    You should've learned you can't see me
    Everything that I am doing is coming out so freely foshizzy
    That freak holds the beat when he steps up to the plate (he's safe), and doesnt even know what I am all about
    He's keeping beaks closed and not shouting when I am taking a break
    It shows that you both can't come close to my toes, when I am in my wake
    E to Everyone noing my name is beyond the grave
    T to the Trash talking your letters, this shit isn't a test
    H to House arrest, my shit is better then all the rest
    E to Ether, another sucker like Chris Tucker getting put under
    R to a Remix that’s dissing your shit
    Silly kids are lame, and don't know who's to blame
    Always pointing fingers while eating your tricks, and Popsicle sticks
    Fucking pricks make me sick when I am spitting lyrics
    Everybody making noise, you're playing with toys,
    So here it goes one last time, I am here to shine in the lights that make you cry
    I'll give you a hundred percent reason to remember my name
    Then get 10 percent in the game to Put yours to shame
    Try 5 and you'll be given polish to give my shoes a new shine
    If you punks still want to battle after this tattle
    Then get your pacifiers, round up the cattle, and grab your rattles cause I am getting even better while your stuck in my shadow
     
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    Ether

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    Your shadows lost without a trace
    Your lyrics make no sense
    You cant keep up with our fast pace
    You loosing all intelligence

    My Rhymes are built on rock and clay
    They crap all over yours
    And when Im ready to pave the way
    You'll go crying to your whores

    An advent miricle is what you need
    But times not on your side
    They skill to rhyme it follows me
    You better go and hide

    My face is here to add appeal
    My nose for smelling shit
    My eyes they're their to seal the deal
    My mouth to make the hit

    Saunderitos has got right
    Freak tries to hold your back
    But take another second look
    You'll soon see what you lack

    My main man Saunderitos shows no fear
    He has a deadly brain
    And if you watch him carefully
    He'll shoot you down with fame

    Together we're unstoppable
    We take the world by storm
    Together we're remarkable
    We cant improve our form
     
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    saunderitos

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    You know you wanna drop this hesh
    Or i'll kick your ass so fresh
    My lines are deadly so I just spit 'em
    So good you wish that you could get 'em
    I don't need to write my rhymes that long
    'Cause i knew i'd win all along
     
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    Arhaz

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    ^^...that ain't something worth a try,
    where are your saucy lines, all deep fried?
    perhaps a little overdoing does this to you,
    give it all up, you're falling through,
    a clear mind but an insane heart,
    and knowing all other failures, needs you to be a rap tart,
    don't fart, it ain't no game,
    you're going down with no name, no fame, it'll lame,
    should act untamed,
    not scrubby as you are, a molten mix in the tar,
    losing with oral curses and swears, looks like you haven't come prepared...
     
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    saunderitos

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    You wanna get some more guys?maybe four
    Still pickin' out the most important flaws
    The rap stage, it's my brain inside
    so when you slip up there's nowhere to hide
    You still reckon you can beat me
    But you dont rap ,no,you speak to me
    Your stuffs monotonous and really viscous
    But my raps cut air,just like a discus
    My lines better than a nuclear bomb
    Thats why i got melee.com




    (not actually my site,just fits my rap name)
     
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    heshboy

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    I am taking you all on at once
    You're all getting crippled by my numchucks
    Ether I'll help you feel a little better
    Your lyrics are piss in a homeless shelter
    You couldn't ever step up in this race when getting chaced
    The pace is too fast and leaving you dead in bed
    I am still living and breathing to everything you're bringing
    It not much, but you talk about such and such
    I'll give you a cruch, so your walk won't be corrupt
    I am locked and loaded, putting a new clip in my glock
    You pick pock my rhymes, now you're the ones doing time
    I spoke all ryhmes before you wrote in time
    You're intellignece is just a rellevance to what I am telling you
    The CIAs got my back, braking your prejudice
    Get this, the headlines is saying you're locked in a cage raped again
    Now you're stuck waiting when I came Late in
    This battle got you're babes grabbing my wang again
    It's a shame my raps got you hating
    I'll give you a rating that will get you stuck on the floor or, hit by a car door and doing some chores
    Now if you want to get owned some more, grab some lead because were going to war
    I told you kids I don't write this shit because it was created in my head when I was still in the crib
     
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    heshboy

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    saunderitos I could greet you with some burritos
    But Instead I'll Smack you in the head, and bring back the dead, take ya down memory lane to get memory back
    I'll give you a tick tack so you can speak my name fully intact
    Its heshboy the one and only black
    Spit the rap game so hard you'll have a shack attack from sniffing crack
    I know my words are addicting, that’s why it has a parental advisory label to keep you from listening
    Now if you want this murder to end, call the 5-0 because my raps are predicting a scor of 10
     
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    saunderitos

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    You attack Ether,and you attack me
    Its makes no differences because you are easy
    I still beat you 'cause your rhymes are sleazy
    Smashin' your face with a lyrical hammer
    Sorry about that,but it's my rappin' manner
    I go for days ,i have great stamina
    But you can't cause i be blam-in ya
    Time counts down 8,7,6,5
    My eletrical lines keepin' fans alive
    time still tickin' 4,3,2,1
    I'll let you guys know when im finished and done
     

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