The World... Colourful complexion set in perfection Monochromatic multi-tones on the inner section Kings and Queens that built the b-side Purified gangsters that always collide Two tone fast blast of musical brilliance Sky scraper sounds that lose our intelligence Platinum water that soothes the land Harmonic openings that cleanse the hand Arsenic views of interloping blues Dysfunctional rejects that read the daily news Global economics ripping up the streets Semi-uploading universal geeks Petrified leaders that reign our lives Dark masked culprits that cause their own demise Varnished politics laying down the law Troubled animals fleeing the war Narcissistic crystal that shatters on touch Ultimate armies that don’t do that much Field-sight fighters that walk a mile Girls and boys that never smile Bombs and guns that just cause pain Deadly tactics to play the game Deception leads to a rise in crime Perception causes a disjointed line Sympathetic sarcastic looks of love Everybody’s dying to the cry of a dove Multimedia projections only of the bad Every damn second seems to make me mad The human hand that constantly measures Emotional distress that smothers all your pleasures Selfish societies stating their impression Mythical mother nature teaching us a lesson. …The World
I don't think you could have done better, it has a certain feel to it that is part of the poem, everyone could take it and make it seem better in their eyes, but that's not what poetry is about, it's trying to understand someone else through their words. Great write, it had an eerieness to it and great imagery. Nce work. B)
What's up Ether? Anyways this stuff is sick. I like it a lot ang give it a 100/10. You, saunderitos, and I should collab. It would be better than Linkin Park and Jay-Z fo sho.
true dude.... we should mix our shit! LP, Jay-Z move over! lol....ill pm you we will sort sumfin out Check Ya! P.S thanks for ya comments...they really help...