I think Ztarduzt was just pointing out that it sounded like "In the end" and trying to show you what he ment, he wasn't really dissing your poem or saying it was bad for sounding like it when it was obviously not on purpose. Ztarduzt wasn't attacking your poem!
i said i liked the lyric... i just said it really sounded like in the end.. anyways.. i think you could have done better.. but this one still is great