Puzzle Pieces In My Head

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    The Outsider

    The Outsider Billy Corgan = God

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    In my mind,
    Its okay.

    In the streets,
    I close my eyes.

    Hoping now,
    Crying later.

    In my head,
    Its still the same.

    Puzzle pieces,
    Trying to solve.

    Anything for myself,
    Is always a challenge.

    Distorted by an image,
    Distorted by reality.

    Shooting low,
    And hoping high.

    In myself, I walk alone,
    Outside of myself, I cry tonight.

    Learning something,
    So strangeful in sight.

    For myself, I defend for myself,
    In myself, I feed myself.
     
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    LProx4life

    LProx4life Well-Known Member

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    It sounds good i like it
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    It had an entrancing power to it which i really liked. It was short simple but very effective. Good work.
     
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    saunderitos

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    its ok,not awesome

    the last 'bit' whatever you call it,cause it's not really a verse :lol:
     

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