Shoe sugar

Shoe sugar

I’m left with one eye
After fighting politics
Seeing the world go by
And killing my critics

[Touch me, make me feel alright
Staring at photography] Chorus

The fox runs by
Leave life in sight
Left handed is shy
No sense is height

[] Chorus

I address it
It runs away
I express it
It fades to grey

[] Chorus

What did you do to me?
It got me mesmerised
Don’t put the fault on me
‘Cause I feel criticised

Snap my stick
Grind your pick
Scream ‘till you’re lungs collapse



This is another one of my songs about nothing

 

i love your songs about "nothing"...
whatever it is..i know i liked it!

 

the chorus is a bit short.. but cool word usage

check my lyric too

 

I like it, lol. Nice use of the word Shoes.

 

thanks guys, keep the comments rolling in

 

I like it. It seems very you, and unabused.

 

thanks guys,more comments

 

"I’m left with one eye
After fighting politics
Seeing the world go by
And killing my critics"


The opening is gold. I was drawn in right from the beginning because it had so much impact. B)

 

B) thanks

 

I think you can do better but it's ok.