(Why Don't You) Find Yourself A Hell

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    a life in ashes

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    (Why Don't You) Find Yourself A Hell

    Leave us alone, get away,
    Your deceit ends here, the seams will fray,
    Shut up, I won't suffer your lies,
    Opened wounds, heart scarred from the tries,
    Hypocrite just get away, your time has gone,
    My enemy your place is in the tomb among...

    Why don't you find yourself a hell,

    I didn't believe, you could sink so low,
    My voice is gone, and just so you know,
    I've cut the ribbons, watched the blood run,
    Writing words to slit your wrists, had your fun,
    But now all of that's gone, your power is no more,
    Darling we won't be hurt by him any...

    Why don't you find yourself a hell,
    A hell where you see where you went wrong,

    Shut up and goodbye,
    Shut up and seal the lies,
    Shut up so I can rest,

    Why don't you find yourself a hell,
    A hell where you see where you went wrong,
    Why don't you find yourself a hell,
    A hell where you see where you went wrong,


    thoughts please...
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    I like. My favourite bit was this one *points to quote*
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it's nice...7/10 ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    I think you should add another verse but it all turned out good.
     

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