Another poisoned devils

The annihilaten of a species,
Drumming to the beating of my heart.

Thumping like the speed of light,
But so gentle as a mice.

Lay my head, and hear the beeping,
And the voices.

Tell me to lie, to kill,
Another poisoned devils.

I'm not saying no one cares,
I know that no one cares.

For the likes of me sleeping,
Is poison in my own mind.

Let them get to me,
Let them override me.

Toxic is the sleep I need,
Toxic is the life I breathe.

Some how I need to it,
To live and to eat.

Feed upon these spirits I fear,
Now I know I am the only one.

To live upon myself, independent,
To seek and destroy myself.

 

awesome

= But so gentle as the mice

 

It seems your writing has taken leaps and bounds evertime you post. k have a great night. B)

 

7.4/10...nice

 

I like the title.

 

sounds like a perfect circle..

i like it

 

it does? wow thats kool cos i had a system of a down song in my head when i wrote that..

 

is another poisoned devils correct english btw?
i think it's another poisened devil

and all your poisoned devils is from a perfect circle.. wich you must know..
counting bodies like sheep to the rythem of the war drums

 

it does? wow thats kool cos i had a system of a down song in my head when i wrote that.. [/b][/quote]
lol

Anyway, i preffered your last piece of work better but this is still great. A few interuptions in the rhythm but it didn't effect the poem overall. Great job.

 

Maybe that too.
Its english too.
Its just abstract literature.